Part 3
Grant came back onto the line. “Dad, this isn’t funny.” Dad offered a weak smile. “I agree.” His expression hardened instantly. “It certainly isn’t.” Vanessa’s heavy breathing echoed through the receiver. “Dad, we have the paperwork right here.” “I’m aware.” “You don’t understand the situation.” “Oh, I understand completely.” Dad lifted his coffee cup once more. “You two called my daughter at six-thirty this morning to announce I was dead.” Neither of them offered a word. Dad took a measured sip. “Then you informed her that my house now belonged to you.” Still silence. “You claimed my truck, my bank accounts, and all my personal belongings were yours. You told her she wasn’t welcome in her childhood home anymore.” His tone remained unnervingly steady. “And finally, you told her I had deliberately cut her out of my will.” Grant finally spoke up. “Dad, we honestly thought—” “No.” Dad cut him off sharply. “You didn’t think.” The words carried a heavy weight. “You simply assumed.” Vanessa burst into tears. Yet Dad showed no sympathy. “Where are you right now?” he demanded. Vanessa hesitated. “At the house.” “Of course you are.” Dad leaned back against the kitchen chair. “How on earth did you get inside?” “We have keys.” “You have keys to the front door.” Vanessa stayed silent. Dad nodded slowly. “So you didn’t actually break in.” “No.” “Good.” He glanced sideways at me. “That saves me one phone call.” I had no clue what he was implying. Neither did Vanessa. “What phone call?” she asked nervously. “To the sheriff.” Absolute silence followed. Grant immediately became defensive. “Why would you call the sheriff? We’re your own children.” Dad’s eyes grew cold. “Exactly.” He looked back at me. “I’ve spent seventy-four years learning that sharing DNA doesn’t make someone trustworthy.” Vanessa’s voice cracked. “Dad, please, don’t do this.” Dad ignored the plea entirely. Instead, he pivoted to a different subject. “Did you go into my office?” Vanessa didn’t respond quickly enough. Dad’s jaw tightened. “You did.” “We were just looking for the will.” “No.” He shook his head firmly. “You were looking for the version of the will you desperately hoped existed.” Grant muttered an excuse under his breath. Dad caught it instantly. “Say that a bit louder.” “I said we were just trying to make sure everything was handled properly.” “Before I had even passed away?” Grant fell quiet. Dad let out a single, harsh laugh. It wasn’t a joyful sound. It was the dry laugh of someone facing absurdity so profound that anger had no words left. “You two are truly unbelievable.” Vanessa began crying even harder. “Dad, we were just so scared.” “Scared of what?” “That you were going to leave everything to Natalie.” Dad looked at me again. I stayed silent. He turned his attention back to the phone. “And that fear justified trying to bury me before breakfast?” “Dad!” “Because that is exactly what you did.” His voice dropped several degrees, turning frigid. “You didn’t just spread lies about my death. You planned your entire lives around it.” Grant tried to interrupt. “We didn’t know you were—” “Alive?” Dad raised a single eyebrow. “Yes. That part is becoming abundantly clear.” I nearly smiled. Dad had always relied on sarcasm when his anger peaked. When I was little, I accidentally broke a lamp while playing indoor baseball. He had stared at the shattered ceramic for ten full seconds before declaring, “Well, at least we know the lamp lost.” This was that exact voice. Only this time, there was zero humor behind it. Vanessa whispered through her tears, “Who told you?” Dad’s eyes narrowed. “Told me what?” “That we were on our way.” Dad glanced at me, then toward the hallway, and back to the phone. “Not a soul.” Vanessa went completely still. Dad pressed on. “You two made one massive error.” “What error?” “You assumed I was completely helpless.” I saw something flicker across his face that I had never witnessed before. Not anger. Not disappointment. Something much deeper. Regret. Not for himself, but for his children. Dad had spent his whole life believing family could endure almost any hardship. It seemed he had finally discovered the one thing it couldn’t survive: greed without a shred of shame.
Part 4
Harold stared at the phone in silence for several seconds. The attorney’s voice broke through the quiet once more. “Mr. Pike, are you still on the line?” Harold’s gaze drifted toward my father. Dad stood frozen in place. “Who are you?” Harold demanded. “My name is Richard Bell. I represent Vanessa Cole.” Dad’s expression shifted, moving away from anger into stark recognition. Harold noticed the change. “You know him?” Dad nodded slowly. “I recognize the name.” Richard continued smoothly. “My client informs me that you are currently holding documents that belong to her father.” Harold raised an eyebrow. “Her father?” “Yes.” “My name happens to be Edward Cole,” Dad interjected. Richard paused on the other end. Then he replied cautiously. “Yes. Edward Cole.” Dad stepped closer to the speakerphone. “Then you should realize that I am Edward Cole.” Dead silence filled the room. After a long beat, Richard said something that made my stomach drop. “I was informed that Mr. Cole passed away last night.” Dad laughed bitterly. “So was my daughter.” Another heavy pause. “I see.” “No,” Dad snapped. “You don’t.” He looked at Harold. “Ask him about the documents.” Harold took the cue. “Exactly what documents are you referring to?” The attorney’s tone turned defensive. “Mr. Pike, I am not inclined to discuss confidential legal matters over the phone.” “Then get over here and discuss them in person.” “I hardly think that’s necessary.” Dad smiled grimly. “Trust me, it will be.” The line went dead as Richard hung up. Nobody said a word. I turned to look at Dad. “Who is he?” Dad rubbed his temples tiredly. “I met him once before.” “When?” “About six months ago.” “Why?” Dad hesitated before answering. “He was brought to the house by Vanessa.” Harold slowly closed the open folders on his desk. “Edward.” “Yes?” “You need to tell Natalie the whole truth now.” Dad nodded solemnly. “I know.” He sank into a chair and began to share a reality I had never suspected. Half a year ago, Vanessa had approached him with a proposal. She claimed she wanted to help him streamline his estate planning. She expressed worry over what would happen if his health suddenly failed. At the time, Dad thought she was simply being responsible. She even introduced him to Richard Bell, who posed as an estate attorney. The lawyer drafted several initial forms. Dad signed a few minor papers, but before touching anything significant, he brought the paperwork to Harold for review. Harold immediately uncovered major red flags. “Some of those papers granted Vanessa total authority over your father’s assets,” Harold explained to me. Dad nodded in agreement. “So I naturally refused to sign them.” “What happened after that?” I asked, breathless. “Vanessa grew furious.” “How furious?” Dad looked straight into my eyes. “She told me I was being stubbornly short-sighted.” A cold shiver ran down my spine. “And then?” “She warned me that if I wouldn’t accept her ‘help’ willingly, she would find another path.” I stared at him in disbelief. “Why didn’t you ever tell me?” Dad looked down at his hands.
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