My MIL ordered me a dress four sizes too small for her anniversary party, then laughed when I said it wouldn’t fit. I bought my own dress instead. But at the party, I overheard two women talking about the dresses Clara had chosen for them, and suddenly realized mine wasn’t the only one with secrets. The dress was gorgeous. That was the hardest part. My MIL ordered me a dress four sizes too small for her anniversary party. Deep blue satin, slender waist, delicate sleeves, the kind of outfit I might have picked out for myself before pregnancy altered what felt comfortable. My baby was three months old. So when Clara called while I was at a department store and mentioned she had already bought mine for her 40th anniversary dinner, I agreed to wait. She had already bought mine for her 40th anniversary dinner. Then I checked the label. The digits were so far off from my actual size that I assumed the boutique had made a ridiculous mistake. I stepped into the garment anyway. It jammed before I could pull it over my hips. The digits were so far from my actual size. I stared at my reflection in the mirror, one arm still trapped awkwardly in the material. My baby began crying from the bassinet. “Yeah,” I muttered. “I know.” I peeled the dress off, packed it back into the box, and called Clara. I stared at my reflection in the mirror, one arm still trapped awkwardly in the material. She picked up on the second ring. “Did it show up?” “Yes. I think they sent the wrong size.” There was a silence. Then Clara chuckled. “No, honey. That’s yours.” I sat on the corner of the bed. “Clara, I can’t even get it on.” “No, honey. That’s yours.” “I know. The celebration is two weeks away,” she stated. “Plenty of time.” “For what?” Another small laugh. “It’s time for you to lose weight.” I glanced toward the bassinet. My daughter had one tiny fist next to her cheek and the deeply offended look she wore whenever the world failed to feed her fast enough. “It’s time for you to lose weight.” “Clara, I had a child three months ago.” “And?” “And I’m not dropping four dress sizes in a fortnight.” “Then perhaps you’ll finally have some drive.” I stayed silent. Clara pressed on. “My son has always kept himself in shape. The least you could do is put in some effort too.” “Then perhaps you’ll finally have some drive.” “An effort?” “Don’t turn this into a production. Eat less. Walk more. You’ve had months.” “Months?” “Jennifer, when was the last time you actually looked at yourself?” I hung up.
Simon walked through the door an hour later. I was nursing the baby on the couch when he spotted the dress box. “Don’t turn this into a production. Eat less. Walk more. You’ve had months.” “Is that the legendary anniversary gown?” I stared at him. “Your mother ordered it four sizes too small.” Simon paused mid-motion while taking off his jacket. “By accident?” “No.” His expression fell. I told him everything else. The mockery. The two-week deadline. The hint that his wife needed to become more visually appealing for him. “Your mother ordered it four sizes too small.” Simon sat next to me and dragged a hand across his face. “Jen…” “Don’t.” He looked into my eyes. “Please don’t say she’s just being your mother,” I blurted out. His hand fell. For years, that had been his standard reply. Clara criticized my cooking? “That’s just Mom.” “Please don’t say she’s just being your mother.” She questioned whether Simon genuinely liked how I styled our home? “Pay her no mind.” He always backed me up… behind closed doors. That distinction had never bothered me quite as much as it did right now. “I’m not wearing it,” I declared. “Of course you aren’t.” “I’ll buy something else.” He always backed me up… behind closed doors. “We’ll buy something else,” Simon corrected. I looked down at our sleeping daughter. Simon followed my gaze. Then he mumbled under his breath, “I should’ve put a stop to this ages ago.” I didn’t reply.
Two days later, Simon accompanied me shopping. “I should’ve put a stop to this ages ago.” I selected a lovely gown with soft fabric and a waistline that sat where my waist actually existed nowadays. I could sit down in it. Breathe freely. Lift my arms without threatening the structural integrity of the stitching. When I emerged from the fitting room, Simon smiled. “That’s the one!” I selected a lovely gown with soft fabric and a waistline that sat where my waist actually existed nowadays. “You haven’t seen the others,” I noted. “Don’t care.” I turned sideways toward the mirror. Simon materialized behind me in the glass. “You comfortable?” “Yeah.” “Then we’re finished.” I bought it. What I didn’t realize was that Simon made a phone call later that afternoon. “You haven’t seen the others.”
The anniversary dinner took place at a high-end restaurant outside town, the sort of establishment featuring linen napkins folded like art pieces and a private salon larger than our first apartment. Clara adored gatherings like that. She adored regulations too. The anniversary dinner took place at a high-end restaurant outside town. Women in navy or black. Men in tuxes. No casual jackets. No patterned ties. Official photographer at 7:30. Family portrait right before dessert. Clara had emailed a three-page itinerary to everyone. As Simon and I stepped inside, Dave spotted us first. “There they are!” Clara had emailed a three-page itinerary to everyone. My father-in-law strode across the floor and embraced Simon, then me. “You look wonderful, Jennifer.” “Thank you.” Then Clara swung around. Her gaze locked straight onto my dress. “That is NOT what I ordered.” “No,” I admitted. Clara gave me a slow once-over. “I can see that.” “That is NOT what I ordered.” Simon stepped closer beside me. I kept my tone light. “The other one didn’t fit… so I…” “It would have if you had listened,” she snapped back. Dave glanced between the two of us. “Clara…” “What? I’m not going to lie to her.” Then she pinched the fabric at her own waist. “The other one didn’t fit… so I…” “This one doesn’t do you any favors either. It looks CHEAP.” Simon cut in, “Mom, enough.” The atmosphere seemed to contract around those two simple words. Clara blinked at him. “I’m helping your wife.” “No. You’re insulting my wife.” Her cheeks flushed. “I only want what’s best for you, Simmy.” “This one doesn’t do you any favors either. It looks CHEAP.” Then she stared right at me. “My son deserves a more attractive woman.” I looked at Simon, but suddenly I didn’t want to hear anyone defend me. I didn’t want to turn into the person standing in the middle of somebody else’s anniversary party while everybody debated whether my physique measured up. “My son deserves a more attractive woman.” “I need the restroom.” Simon reached for my wrist. “Jen…” “I’m fine.” I wasn’t, but I craved five quiet minutes far more than another argument.
Inside the restroom, I locked myself inside a stall and sat down on the closed lid. I was furious. I craved five quiet minutes far more than another argument. At Clara. At myself for still letting her get under my skin. At Simon, a little bit, because years of “ignore her” had evidently taught his mother she could say whatever she pleased and still secure a seat at our table afterward. After a moment, I heard the washroom door swing open. Two women were chatting near the sinks. Years of “ignore her” had evidently taught his mother she could say whatever she pleased and still secure a seat at our table. “Did yours fit?” “Eventually.” “What’s that supposed to mean?” “Clara instructed the boutique to alter the sleeves.” I froze. The other woman laughed nervously. “Mine too. She claimed my arms photographed poorly.” “You’re kidding.” “I wish.” Their voices drifted away as they exited. “Clara instructed the boutique to alter the sleeves.” I stared at the partition door. My dress wasn’t an isolated incident. Clara hadn’t bought me a clumsy present. She had been orchestrating women. Then Clara shrieked from somewhere outside the restroom. “Those belong to me!” I hurried out into the corridor. Clara shrieked from somewhere outside the restroom. The private dining area had dissolved into a shouting match. A waiter rushed past me toward the entrance. Three garment bags hung from a rolling rack next to a woman I didn’t recognize. She wore a sleek black suit with a boutique ID tag clipped near her collar. Three garment bags hung from a rolling rack next to a woman I didn’t recognize. Clara had arranged for several women’s dresses to be delivered straight to the restaurant for final adjustments prior to the photos. Simon stood right beside her. Dave stood a few paces away, looking deeply uncomfortable. Clara had one hand clenched around the handle of a garment bag. “Ma’am,” the woman said levelly, “please let go.” Clara had arranged for several women’s dresses to be delivered straight to the restaurant for final adjustments. “I paid for those dresses!” “You paid reservation fees.” “Don’t play games with me.” “Clara,” Dave said, “let the professional do her job.” Clara pivoted toward him. “This is our property!” The representative corrected her. “I paid for those dresses!” “No. These items remain boutique property until the women they were intended for accept them and the remaining balances are cleared. You also disputed the final charges after demanding we bring the garments here tonight.” Dave looked over at Clara. “You did what?” Clara’s expression faltered. “There were complications with the orders.” “You also disputed the final charges after demanding we bring the garments here tonight.” “Complications you requested,” the woman stated. “We have every alteration and size adjustment logged under your authorization.” Clara stiffened. She glanced toward the restaurant manager. “Are you seriously going to let her walk out of here carrying thousands of dollars worth of my wardrobe?” “We have every alteration and size adjustment logged under your authorization.” The manager kept his hands clasped before him. “Ma’am, she has paperwork proving the garments belong to the boutique.” Clara tightened her grip on the garment bag. “Nobody is taking these anywhere.” The coordinator reached for it. “Ma’am, I need you to release the garment.” “I said no.” “Nobody is taking these anywhere.” The restaurant manager stepped closer. “Ma’am, if you refuse to surrender the boutique’s property, I’ll be forced to contact authorities.” Clara glared at him. “Go ahead.” He did.
Twenty minutes later, two police officers walked into the private dining hall. By then, several guests had dropped the pretense of ignoring the scene. “Ma’am, if you refuse to surrender the boutique’s property, I’ll be forced to contact authorities.” Clara intercepted the officers before anyone else could. “She’s attempting to steal items I paid for.” One officer looked over at the boutique coordinator. “Ma’am?” The woman handed across a folder. While they examined it, Simon walked toward me. “Jen.” “What is going on?” He threw a glance at Clara. “The manager called them.” “She’s attempting to steal items I paid for.” “Because of the dresses?” “Because Mom wouldn’t let them leave with the outfits. But there’s more.” Before he could elaborate, one of the officers scanned the room. “Is Jennifer present?” Every eye seemed to pivot in my direction. I stepped forward. “That’s me.” “Because Mom wouldn’t let them leave with the outfits. But there’s more.” The officer gave me a reassuring nod. “You’re not in any trouble.” Clara opened her mouth. He raised one hand. “Ma’am, please.” Then he looked back to me. “We were dispatched regarding a dispute over formal wear for this function. The vendor has provided records proving the contested items belong to the boutique.” “You’re not in any trouble.” I looked over at Clara. “You’re fighting over dresses that aren’t even yours?” “They were paid for!” The officer replied, “Deposits were put down. That is not equivalent to ownership.” Clara’s face went crimson. The boutique coordinator quietly chimed in, “Some of the garments were never approved by the women they were designated for.” “You’re fighting over dresses that aren’t even yours?” I thought of the women back in the restroom. Then Simon brushed my elbow. “Jen, come with me.” He guided me away from the dining room toward the coat check, where the coordinator followed us holding a tablet. “Jen, come with me.” Clara started to chase after us. Dave grabbed her arm. “Let them go.” The coordinator pulled up an order log. My name sat right at the top. Jennifer. Beneath it was my correct current dress size. Then, underneath that, a later modification. Four sizes smaller. Authorized by Clara. Beneath it was my correct current dress size. And right beside it, a single typed command: DO NOT SUBSTITUTE LARGER. I read it twice. Simon murmured, “I called the boutique two days ago because I wanted to swap the dress.” I stared at him. “You did?” “Yes.” The coordinator scrolled further down. “There’s something else you really ought to see.” “I called the boutique two days ago because I wanted to swap the dress.” She opened another attachment Clara had submitted alongside the dress orders. “Your mother-in-law wanted every outfit coordinated with where each woman was positioned in the family portrait.” I looked at Simon. Then back at the screen. It wasn’t another clothing invoice. It was a positioning blueprint. “Your mother-in-law wanted every outfit coordinated with where each woman was positioned in the family portrait.” At the top were three words. FORMAL FAMILY PORTRAIT Names had been mapped out in rows. Beside several of the women were handwritten notes. Jacket closed. Keep seated. Turn left. Sleeves down. Then I found my own. JENNIFER – BACK EDGE. SIMON FRONT. I stared at the display. Beside several of the women were handwritten notes. Clara hadn’t merely wanted me slimmer. She had mapped out what to do if I wasn’t. Behind us, her voice pierced through the hallway. “What exactly are you showing her?” Simon turned around. Clara stood there with Dave standing behind her. “What exactly are you showing her?” Her face remained flushed from the police incident, but now fury had replaced the embarrassment. Simon checked the screen one last time. Then he looked at his mother. “Mom, was Jennifer supposed to lose weight… or vanish?” Clara uttered nothing. And for the first time all evening, neither did I. “Mom, was Jennifer supposed to lose weight… or vanish?” Clara finally recovered her voice. “I was trying to make the picture look nice.” Simon stepped right beside me. “Then listen to me clearly, Mom. From now on, you don’t comment on Jen’s physique. You don’t pick outfits to alter her, and you don’t decide where she stands in a photograph. If you can’t respect that, we won’t be attending these functions.” “I was trying to make the picture look nice.” Clara stared at him. Simon held his ground. Dave looked toward his wife. “Clara, it’s our 40th anniversary.” He shook his head. “I think I’ve earned one picture of my actual family instead of your choreography of them.” The photographer approached cautiously. “How would you like everyone arranged?” “I think I’ve earned one picture of my actual family instead of your choreography of them.” Clara drew a breath to reply. Dave cut her off, “Ask them.” So he did. People shifted wherever they pleased. An aunt remained seated because her knees ached. One cousin discarded the wrap Clara had insisted she wear. I stood right next to Simon, precisely where I wanted to be. People shifted wherever they pleased. Before the snap, I whispered, “Do I look okay?” Simon looked me over. “Are you comfortable, Jen?” I glanced down at the dress I had chosen myself. “Yeah.” “Then you’re good.” Click.
Later on, the boutique coordinator held up Clara’s blue dress. “Would you like this reordered in your proper size?” “Are you comfortable, Jen?” I looked at it once. “No, thank you.” I handed it back myself. Toward the end of the night, one of the grandchildren showed Clara a candid shot snapped during the commotion. Dave’s tie was crooked. Someone was laughing wide-mouthed. I was holding a forkful of cake. I handed it back myself. Clara started to say, “Delete…” Then paused. She looked again. “…send me that one.” Across the room, I took another bite of cake. Clara noticed. For once, she kept her thoughts to herself. “…send me that one.”
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